![]() ![]() ![]() And it's these little things which personally throw me off while reading. Plus I believe that even the colour of Anna's hair changed from the first book. Liliana is called Vitiello instead of Cancio. I feel like the editing is getting worse and worse.ģ) Plus the author should probably get an editor who checks for *continuity* or maybe just more beta readers? Because in this book Nino was called Remo's oldest brother. ![]() I would like to mention a few things - a bit on the side.ġ) What is it with the new covers? I feel like the black&white ones fit the books better.Ģ) The author should fire her editor and get a refund. ![]() It was tough to get into the story and hardly even felt like a story, more like notes on what was happening in the Outfit when the focus was on different characters. Plus it started when Dante was nineteen and ended when Dante's what forty-eight or nine? It covers a pretty long time and therefore it's very jumpy, a scene here and then a scene that takes place months/years later. Unfortunately, that was not the case.Īnd so you do not need to read my whole review which is rather long (sorry!) the main reason why I rate this book relatively low is that I just did not enjoy reading it, it was dragging for me. I was not really a fan of the first Dante&Val book, but I was ready to be convinced. This is probably the longest it took me to finish a Cora Reilly book. ![]()
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